Welcome to Admissionhook.com What is an "admission hook"?  It is what makes you different from the thousands of applications a college receives.  It is a reason for an admission officer to fish you out and accept you.   Learn how to craft your own hook. Read our guide to writing the college essay. Read sample essays. See comments from a former Director of Admission. Win scholarship money. Now, Two Ways to Win a Scholarship From AdmissionHook.com Submit your essay, and if you are one of the top 5 vote getters, your essay will be reviewed by a committee and you will have the chance to win one of our $1,000 semi-annual scholarships. Register on our site and vote for other student's essays.  That's right, it is now your turn to determine the fate of your peers.  Does the essay have a hook?  Is it written by someone with whom you would like to share your college experience?  The registered user who votes for the most essays will also be eligible for a semin-annual $500 scholarship. For more information on our scholarship programs, visit the scholarship details page.  Congratulations to the June 2009 Scholarship Winners, $1,000 essay contest winner Yeon Choo and $500 scholarship winner Karessa Duran. Learn more about our winners at our scholarship winners page.